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[発見!化学論文] 第3回:間違えがちなポイントを解説(修飾関係) Easy Mistakes Explained: Misplaced Modifiers

2026年8月31日


(English version is here.)

1)We have also developed a library of azoles, which are π-electron compounds with a large twist between electron-accepting and electron-donating sites linked via the azole ring, and developed a simple synthetic method.

上の文章を例に、化学論文を書く上で皆さんが良く間違えがちなポイントを解説していきます。

下線1)
修飾文が不明瞭で「p-electron compounds with a large twist」が「library」か「azoles」のどちらを修飾するのかが曖昧です。基礎有機化学の知識を思い出すと、「azoles」を修飾していることが分かりますが、明確に伝えるべきです。

この複文を書き直してみましょう。

We have developed a library of p-electron compounds, azoles with a large twist between electron-accepting and electron-donating sites linked via the azole ring, and developed a simple synthetic method.

こうすると修飾関係が明らかになりました。

次回もどうぞお楽しみに。
 



Easy Mistakes Explained: Misplaced Modifiers

1)We have also developed a library of azoles, which are π-electron compounds with a large twist between electron-accepting and electron-donating sites linked via the azole ring, and developed a simple synthetic method.

Using the sentence above as an example, we will explain some mistakes commonly made when writing chemistry papers.

Underline 1:
The modifier p-electrons with a large twist is unclear and whether the library of azoles or azoles is modified is vague. Thinking logically, azoles are p-electron compounds with a large twist is not strictly true, but a library of azoles that have a large twist between accepting and donating sites is not a problem. That is to say, if we recall our basic knowledge of organic chemistry, we will understand that library of azoles is being modified, but this should be clearly conveyed.

Let us rewrite the compound sentence.
We have developed a library of p-electron compounds, azoles with a large twist between electron-accepting and electron-donating sites linked via the azole ring, and developed a simple synthetic method.

In doing this, the modifier relationship has become clear.

We look forward to seeing you next time.